13 Mart 2009 Cuma












Travelling is something indispensible for us. Visiting a foreign country, getting to know about different cultures and meeting new people are things nearly everbody likes and wants.Certainly I am one of them :) If I were given a chance to visit a foreign country I want, my choice would be certainly Egypt. My reasons for it are that: its mysterious pyramids, my love for archeology and the films related to it, and my wonder about Cairo.

First of all I would choose Egypt because it is really interesting in some aspects. As you know the most important one is pramids. They are really mysterious structures. For example, if you put a glass of dirty water in the pyramid for some days, you will find it purified. In pyramid, milk can become yoghurt without going off. If you put a glass of water in pyramid, after 5 weeks you can use it body lotion. The inside of the pyramids is hot during winter and cold during summer. Plants grow faster than normal in pyramids. They have such a lot of interesting aspects that I can write only few of them. I want to see and explore them. To tell the truth, I don't want to be deprived of these mysteries.

Secondly, you know whenever people want to make an archeological film, they go to Egypt. I watched some films in which there are lots of things from ancient Egypt, mummies, pharaos etc. As archeology draws my attention very much and the films I watched makes me curious about everything related to archeology, Egypt is the first place I should see.

The other reason for my wish to visit Egypt is my wonder about its capital, Cairo. As it I read some books which includes some interesting parts about Cairo, I want to see this city. I some photos of this nice city and I really like them. This increases my interest.

To sum up, for all reasons I mentioned Egypt will always in my dreams and one day if I have an opportunity I will choose that nice country to explore its beauty and mystries.

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  1. This is a very-well organized essay, I believe. I just wanted to mention one thing about your thesis statement. You could have combined these two sentences

    If I were given a chance to visit a foreign country I want, my choice would be certainly Egypt. My reasons for it are that: its mysterious pyramids, my love for archeology and the films related to it, and my wonder about Cairo.

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    If I were given a chance to visit a foreign country I want, my choice would be certainly Egypt for its mysterious pyramids, my love for archeology and the films related to it, and my wonder about Cairo.

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