INTRODUCTION
THESIS STATEMENT: Everybody has some features and as living creatures, we have some opinions about the friends around us. So naturally, the people I know have some opinions about me, too. Even though I am an ordinary person and most of my friends know nearly everything about me but certainly, they do not know some things.
BODY PARAGRAPH#1: I easily remember the films in which Kemal Sunal acts especially Hababam Sınıfı. This can result from the fact I like him and his films very much.
· Watching it only once is enough for me to remember most of its scenes.
· The most interesting one is that I can remember each word the actors and actresses use in the film.
· When I see any comic act, I instantly remember one of the scenes of it.
· If I close my eyes, I can watch most of the film J as if I was watching it in TV.
BODY PARAGRAPH#2: While I am sleeping, the dreams I have are really interesting.
· How the dream goes on depends on me. I can change it if I want.
· While sleeping, I can dream a film I have watched before and even if this film doesn’t have any happy end, I can end it with happiness.
· The most interesting one is that I have nightmares in which there are the Devils L
BODY PARAGRAPH#3: I am very sensitive and worried about everything even the most trivial ones.
· I can cry at any moment and at any situation.
· A trivial thing can make me feel sad.
· Even if there is no logical reason, I can find something to worry and be unhappy.
CONCLUSION: As you can see, life is full of conflicts. A person who loves Şaban so much can have a sensitive character at the same time.
6 Mart 2009 Cuma
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Good organization; however, the only thing I wanted to say is that in your thesis statement "Even though I am an ordinary person and most of my friends know nearly everything about me but certainly, they do not know some things." You should give some clues about those things. Instead of writing some things, write their names using just a phrase or a word like "They don't know that I am ..." or "They don't know my attitude towards," etc. Good luck with your essay.
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